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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello! I'm here for our review swap!

And...wow. You've got a very interesting idea here! So much happens in this chapter - a wedding, a ghost who turns out to be the Grim Reaper, the revelation that Draco's kids are not Draco's kids...it all makes for a very unusual and entertaining read!

I love the continuous switching between past and present - it's something I always like when reading stories. It also gave your fic an element of suspense...I kept trying to guess what was happening throughout :)

Hopefully you get the spacing issue fixed - I see other reviewers have already commented on it!

Well, anyway, this is a good start to your story :) Good luck with writing the rest of it! And thanks for agreeing to do a swap with me :D

-teh

Author's Response: thank you so much for reviewing =)

im glad you liked tht! i tried to fix the spacing :P


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