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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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Gah, I love reading your writing! Everything I've read so far is just so fun! I think this chapter was a very nice little introduction to what I'm sure is going to be an awesome story. You've already begun to develop Millie's character in this chapter which is great, and she looks as though she's going to be a pretty awesome character with a nice amount of sass!

Oooh, the nightmare at the start was intriguing-I wonder what provoked it? And what exactly as Millie been through? I'm so interested to find out! Do you know what the thing that made me love Millie the most was? The fact that she ate ice cream for breakfast! I mean, ice cream is my personal favourite breakfast food, how could I not like her after that??

Your characterizations of James and Sirius were spot on. I especially liked the line: '“Well, if you want her to fawn over you and worship your shadow or something, you’re after the wrong girl, mate.” It made me laugh and it also managed to give hints about the personalities of both Millie and Sirius, which is a hard thing to do in one sentence!

How could Lily forget Millie's birthday!!?? That's awful-but I'm glad she made up for it in the end, and Millie seems to be a pretty easy going girl anyway, which I love. Oh, and I really liked what was told about Lily's personality in the line: 'When Lily was angry or upset (or, as in this case, both) you did as Lily told you to do.'

Very nice chapter!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: *blushes profusely* *doesn't know how to respond to such nice words* *brain shuts down* *blushes some more*

Millie wasn't originally supposed to be sassy, but as you might have noticed in my other epic (all one chapter of it) I can't help giving my leading ladies a bit of sass!

The nightmare was so much fun! I really shouldn't have had that much fun writing it, but I did, and it remains one of my favourite bits of descriptive writing I have ever written. And I've always wanted to eat ice cream for breakfast! That is an actual goal of my life: meet Oprah Winfrey, and eat ice cream for breakfast, preferably at the same time.

I adore James and Sirius so much - they're my ultimate brotp, so I'm so glad you think I did them justice!

And Lily is terrible like that! She did remember though! And she does try to make up for it, so we must forgive her, however horrendous her actions (or non-actions, as the case may be). And seriously, that is Lily in one line, right there.

And thank you again for the wonderful review!


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