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Review:Kc says:
I liked the theme and storyline. Character development was good. Could have fleshed out Harry's depression, more interaction w Mrs Granger, her memories of her magical pregnancy, and what did Ron and Ginny do w the paparazzi photo of Hermione and Harry?
Some issues tho, child, you need a proof reader. You can not spell. Grammar is terrible. Het instead of her, safe not save. So many poor spellings or typos. Did not attempt to correct on each page. I like to read through the whole story. Also, in labor, you push not press the baby out. Trust me, it is not an ironing experience. You want that kid out of there! Also it is not a navel cord. It is an umbilical cord which when cut at delivery results in the navel or belly button.

Author's Response: Thank you for your relpy. I have to admit that English is not my native language but I try as hard as I can. If you have time to beta read it for me I would really like that. An other reader said she had taken most of the errors out, but I understand she overlooked some.

If you have time I an willing to send you the document...

I hope you liked it nevertheless.

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