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Review:CloakAuror9 says:
Hello! (:

I may not be crying right now, but I am close to it. I'm not really an AU person, but I found that I liked this one-shot.

I think Ginny's thoughts could've been a bit more defined because they seemed a bit repetitive to me, but it wasn't a really big problem. I just kinda noticed it maybe three-quarters down the story.

The twist in the end really stabbed my heart. Its not just the fanfiction itself but the possibility that the HP series could've ended this way. Jeez, my heart will be shattered. Imagine if it didn't end with 'all was well'. :'(

Anyway, great job with the story! I enjoyed it even though my heart kinda suffered a bit. ;)

~Izzy

24th review out of 100

Author's Response: Glad you liked this one-shot! I'm not much of an AU person either, though I like experimenting with it sometimes. I know this lacked some detail but I was focusing so much on the emotions I didn't notice. x)

Yeah, I had fun with this 'what-if' scenario, and the HP series could have really ended this way. (But I could never separate Harry and Ginny! D:)

Thanks again for the lovely review! :)

~Rosie


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