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Review:Ron 4 Hermione says:
Wow!
There was something different, good different, about this fic but I can't quite put my finger on it. It didn't feel like a story but it did flow like one, and then it was just different! But like I said, it was a good different!

I loved the way you had Dennis saying things like " Here's a photograph" and then describing it! It really drew me in and showed just how much he cared for his borther, he's kept all these photograph and he's looking through them, remembering his brother. It's such a sweet image and I think you got across the emotions really well.

Your descriptions were lovely, the beach and the fireworks photographs really stood out and I could picture really clearly what you were describing!
This is a lovely piece and I'm addingg it to my favourites! :)

Author's Response: My goodness, shaza! Thanks so so so much for this lovely review. And for favouriting it as well! Wow, I'm so flattered and honoured that you liked it so much :D

As for why it doesn't feel like a story...it's because there's completely no plot whatsoever :p It's just poor old Dennis looking at a bunch of photographs. I got this idea from the short story I mentioned in the disclaimer :) So it's not a very original story...only my words are original, that is :D

Oh, thank you so so much once again! And thanks for agreeing to do a swap with me :D

-teh


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