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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hello!


I'm here to give your review from the thread in the CR.

First, I have to say that I love the James/Lily pairing. It's been written extensively, I know, but I never get tired of them. So, I just couldn't resist when I saw this.

I have to compliment you on the bold choice, to actually write a Qudditch game. They are so difficult to write (personally I've never attempted one and don't think I will since I'm rubbish at sports) and you've done this one justice. It was fast paced and alert and all around lovely.

I love how you portraied Lily here. She's torn between holding on to the fact that James is annoying and arrogant and accepting he's changed. Their whole exchange was so sweet it left me with a big smile. Dare I ask you turn it into a short story and write the party scene? Perhaps not, but maybe one day if you feel like it.

Good luck in the challenge and congratulations on your very sweet story!

Ral

Author's Response: Hello!

Thank you for the lovely review! Haha, I agree with you on the whole Lily/James but I can't help it either! I love reading/writing them!

Oh, trust me I found writing Quidditch unbelievably hard and if it wasn't for not being able to get the whole idea out of my head I wouldn't have done it! I'm so glad you think I've done it justice though, like I said, it was really hard so that means a lot!

Your not the first one to mention writing more and I have definitely thought about it since. I think I will give it a go at some point so watch this space!

Thank you and thanks again for the review!

Lauren


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