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Review:FriendofMolly says:
Jimmbo,
It was lovely. At least remembering his first encounter with Lily, took his mind away from the torture that Bella was inflicting on him. I do want to make a correction. The date you have July 31st 1980, is actually Harry's birthday. In DH, the Godrics Hollow chapter it listed both James and Lily's birthdays were in 1960, on their headstone, Lily in January and James in March. So I think Lily would have gone to Diagon Alley in 1961. Otherwise I did enjoy this chapter. That Lily had a Phoenix wand was a great connection. Though it must have been another Phoenix, as Fawkes only gave Ollivander 2 feathers. I do hope that writing this chapter will lead to writing more,
FoM

Author's Response: Hey FoM,

The choice of it being Harry's birthday when Lily went was a deliberate one, but the year is clearly wrong. I'll get that changed. I hope to get the next chapter up a little sooner than this one took. I find it hard to combine work with writing, but I'll do my best.

Thanks for your support


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