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Review:Lumos Nox says:
Hey, it's Vicky from the review tag! :)

I really love the beginning of your story, you made sure to include the facts from Teddy's life, by using it to build up the story and end it!

I think the relationship between Teddy and Victoire is absolutely adorable. The way Teddy acts, you can tell that he's in love with her. The chipanzee smile, green hair, and noticing every single feature about her!

The awkwardness between the two was expected and a little cute. I'm very surprised that Teddy didn't know that Victoire liked him back, with the way she was acting and everything, it was quite obvious!

I don't ever read one-shots, but I seriously enjoyed this. It had just the right amount of fluff but not too fluffy. I was grinning madly when they both agreed that it was a date. The tension to lead up was unbearable!

I'm glad I read this! I read your other work before and it was amazing! You're a really brilliant writer, keep it up! xo

Author's Response: Sup! Thank you for reviewing!

The beginning of this story was the hardest thing to write, so I'm really happy you liked it so much!

Teddy and Victoire are pretty adorable, aren't they? Especially Teddy. I love Teddy.

When it comes to the ladies, Teddy is a complete noob!

And not a one-shots fan? Wow! Well done on stepping out of your comfort zone! And I'm totally chuffed that it was an enjoyable experience!

And yes! I read your review for the first chapter of my first fic! So wonderful! And thank you so much! You're too kind!


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