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Sirius and Severus, both were great! ;) You've captured Severus' mind perfectly, I must say. His conversation with Lily, feelings about Beth and the confusion everything's just awesome.
As for Sirius's part, I thought it was very very good because I personally can't write Sirius.. =[ I find him too complicated, you know. He was mischievous, careless boy when he was in school and then maybe Azkaban changed him.
Anyway, can't wait to see where this goes! =]

Ashwini

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear you think I've got into Severus's mind well! :) I really have tried to explore his character accurately wherever I write him, and especially in these books. Hearing that really made my entire day!

Sirius is actually more complicated than I think I anticipated, but I got a lot of his characterization from the novel 'Curious Happenings at Number Twelve' by Toujours Padfoot -- Sarah has an absolutely BRILLIANT vision of him in that story, and I'd be lying if I didn't say a lot of my Sirius was inspired by it. That being said, I'm so happy you found him accurate here, too! This is one of the best reviews I've had on this chapter; just knowing that people are finding what I hoped they'd find in my stories... it's an indescribable feeling.

Your reviews are so great, Ashwini. I honestly cannot thank you enough for leaving them. :) Hoping to see you back very soon!!


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