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Review:TheSortingHat says:
WHOA!!! Madi, I didn't see this twist coming AT ALL!!!
If I may ask, is it in any way inspired by The Hostage Situation? I see some connections to it.
There are a few logic issues with it- why wouldn't McGonagoll be looking for Draco herself? Why wouldn't she have the entire staff looking? I'd suggest inserting a reason at some point in the chapters to come- perhaps it's important that if possible, no one knows what happened? The teachers needed to be around to make it appear that things were still going on normally, leaving only the Golden Trio to save the day?
Anyways, can't wait for what happens next! (And a possible touching scene as Hermione saves Draco... :) )

Author's Response: No, it's actually not, I just kind of wrote it in--that's why the logic isn't quite right. I do like your idea of keeping it secret though, since that's kind of where I was planning on going with it.
As for a "touching" scene between Hermione & Draco, I haven't written one yet since I'm planning on making it slow and complex between them! Thanks for the review and for catching that mistake! :) xx

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