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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HELLO!

Its Gabbie here with your requested review. I actually favorited this so I can read this whenever I like. :)
So we're back to Ms. Thalia! I was really interested in her reaction to Sirius during the Quidditch scene, it seems like there's some tension between them. :3
I also really like that you're hinting at the future here later on. It made me sad to think about Alice and Frank though and I burst out laughing over that bit with James and Fleur's mama. Hahahahaha. If only I could have seen that! :D
But Thalia is having more in common with Sirius than she would have thought. The Muggle books were one thing but they have that same sort of neglected home life going on. That's actually a good build up for more in the future and that almost kiss? :3 Oh, James, thanks for interrupting!!! >:(
What I'm curious about is whether or not Sirius is going to make the moves on Thalia or stay back since its obvious that George fancies here. Curious to see where that goes! I thought that that was some pretty good foreshadowing for the future and I really enjoyed this chapter, I thought your pacing was good and your characters are holding up and being put in the most awkward situations. :)
There were some grammar things but not many and you should be so happy right now! :D Great chapter, thanks for the read!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hey Gabbie! Your review made me laugh so much so kudos for that! And thank you for favouriting it means a lot! Yeah it makes me sad that eventually I'm going to have to kill nearly everyone off or make them mentally scarred, but I'll make sure I have box of tissues near me when I write it! Yeah I thought that it would be good for James and his ego to get rejected by a veela, as it would show not everyone is into as much as he thinks! Yeah I almost wanted the kiss to happen as well, but I thought it would probably be to soon, and I needed the thing with George to happen, to show Sirius how much he likes her! Yeah with Sirius he's holding back at the moment, but in the chapter I'm currently writing (no. 8 I think?), they do get closer ;) Wah I hate grammar why does it have to exist? When I'm feeling intelligent enough to spot it out, I'll go back and get rid of the errors! Thank you for the lovely review, Kiana :D

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