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Review:Arithmancy_Wiz says:
Hello again. Stopping back in for another chapter.

You had some really great details in this one. The bit about the flames dancing across the logs was nice way to draw in the reader right from the start. And you're continuing to do a great job with the characters. Of course Slughorn would have had the house elves decorate for him, and of course Hermione wouldn't approve. Cormac was really well done here too. I like how you mentioned him sort of parading her around the party, like she was some sort of trophy. That does seem the sort of thing he would do.

The bit with the mistletoe was great. I love the idea that it traps people in place until they kiss. And the thought of Cormac just sort of stuck there on his own was too funny. I wonder who had to kiss him to set him free.

And it was good to see Malfoy again at the end, knowing this will eventually be a Dramione. It will be interesting to see how you eventually bring them together.

Author's Response: A Wiz I absolutely love and miss your reviews for this story! Your review has really made my day! I really love this story and it's been a huge surprise to me just how many people are actually enjoying it and think that I'm doing a great job with characterization. It really means a lot to me. I'm glad you liked the bit with the mistletoe, I wanted to do something a little bit more with it other than it just being there. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.

~Slytherinchica08~


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