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Review:TheHeirOfSlytherin says:
The Secret Life of Slytherins - a fitting title for the most interesting house. ;)

The more I read, the bigger my intrigue became. Secrets everywhere and there's only been, like, three characters so far. I'm excited and curious and I just need to know what Tracy is hiding - I think I've guessed half of Daphne's. Who she is, however. That is the question. :P

I love that Tracy's crush is on Theo, rather than Draco or Blaise. Everyone should love Theo, that's not just my love for him coming through. I think he's awesome. And I love your characterization of him. He seems like kind of the bad boy type, which is how we Slytherins seem to be seen as, but it suits. I'm so excited to see more of Theo. His want to get revenge was a great touch, I can't wait to see what he does. :D

One of my favorite parts was describing Slytherin House in general; "We are loyal to each other in our own ways; if one Slytherin is taken down we all are, so we protect our own but only when needed." I totally agree. Our traits aren't necessarily bad, like other Houses aren't necessarily good.

Great first chapter, I can't wait to know more!

SamMalfoy.

Author's Response: EEEK! You have no idea how much this makes my day! I'm so glad that this first chapter has been able to catch your interest! The whole point of this story is to be one secret on top of another and all the plot lines interacting with each other. I know I'm a hardcore Tracey/Theo shipper. Yeah I think Slytherin is a very deep house.. one that takes a lot of thought to figure out. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08!


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