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Review:nott theodore says:
I think this is a really sweet story. You develop your characters well and the supporting characters fit in the story too. I especially like the dialogue between Remus and Sirius, it seems to fit their relationship and their personalities. I like the gifts that you chose for them to give each other, they don't seem cliched but they seem appropriate. The only thing I would say is that you could have made it more obvious that it was Christmas with the setting - I didn't realise they were exchanging Christmas presents until the end of the story. But I really like this story, well done!

Author's Response: Yeah, I need to go back and edit in more Christmassy stuff. :/ I wrote it for a Christmas exchange so it was sort of obvious then, but now it needs editing. Thanks for pointing that out. I totally forgot that I hadn't made it all that apparent.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review, and I'm really, really happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks again. ^_^

- Adele.

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