Hey I'm back with part 2 of the review!
I really love her nickname lump, it's just so adorable, I'm guessing that Ben was going to say cute when he changed it to stupid? He really can't show his true feelings can he? I still really want to know why he hates her cousins so much, because it can be Weasley prejudice as he's fine with Roxanne!
"You’d better be in Slytherin then.” This line really reminded me of Snape when he said that to Lily, I guess those two had a rather strange friendship just like Rox and Ben do!
I really loved George and Angelina playful relationship it was so nice to read! I would really love to see more of them, and it was cool seeing George being a dad! I liked how you showed that Roxie was rather spoilt, as it showed that both her and Ben have their fatal flaws.
I certainly didn't expect Ben and Roxie to sleep together! I knew it was getting pretty heated in the last chapter, but not that heated. I'm not too sure about that as Roxie does seem innocent so it's weird thinking her and Ben have slept together.
AAHH! Ben! AAHH! HE'S EVIL! Definitely convinced about him being Voldy and Bellatrix's love child, only someone with their genes could be that mean. After sleeping with her, then treating her like that. I could deal with the fact he may not want the backlash of Weasley, and being a commitment phobe, but the whole chucking her out the house was too far! And yes I know Roxie's immature, but he didn't need to say it. I thought they were actually going to get together at the end of the flashback, and he seemed quite nice for once! And then boom! Everything changes! How could he do that!
Ok I probably should stop my rant now! Other than Benjamin being evil, I really enjoyed the rest of the chapter, as it had so muc drama, which I love! I really love your flashbacks as it helps me understand how they became friends, so keep on including them! This was great, and feel free to re-request whenever, Kiana ;D x
Author's Response: Hello!
"You're just so plump and cu--stupid," hahaa. Is that the line you meant? I'm not sure where the lump really came from but it is pretty hilarious isn't it? Hahaha. Ben's not too bad, in the flashback anyway! He's just a little boy without any friends so I guess he gets lonely so you'll have to excuse him. :D
Actually, that's a good comparison to Snape! I forget that he had such a weird friendship with Lily! (I usually cry thinking about him) But it does match up well with Ben and Roxie doesn't it? Wow. Thanks for pointing that out there! Hopefully it won't end as badly. D':
He'll reveal his true feelings for the Weasley cousins soon. Its not just from their fame and glory, there's actually something not quite pleasant happening with how he sees them. And at some point, you might not blame him.
Oh, you'll see more of George and Angelina, no worries there! They're so fun to write for, they're a very happy couple and I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much. I love them, they're my favorite shipping you know! :D
And yes, Roxanne is VERY spoiled. It will actually prove to be something she has to change later on down the line but it does show a flaw with her doesn't it? And Ben has so many. He's anti-social. Hahahaha.
Ooh, I'm sure you didn't expect Ben and Roxie to sleep together! It was becoming rather heated, wasn't it?! Roxanne is sooo innocent but I think that's sort of the reason she did sleep with Ben. She trusted him and didn't think that he would hurt her. Poor thing.
HAHAHAHAH! BEN. Yes, he's pretty darn awful right now, isn't he? How do I come back from this and make him more likeable? Hahah, I have no idea. Nah, he's not Voldy and Bella's love child, but he is pretty awful, isn't he?
Oh, yes, he has so many issues but chucking her out of the house was a bit much, wasn't it? Then again, Roxanne did punch him in the face. And kick him. And yell at him. And he might have felt a tad guilty and wasn't sure what to do about it. Hahahhaha. >:D
Roxanne might have needed him to point out how immature she was but, not right then. :(
I put that flashback ahead of the final scenes on purpose, just to add salt into a wound for you guys. :) See how cruel I am?
Oooh, thanks for enjoying my flashbacks! I love writing them and I'll keep them going, though you may not see them every chapter, you'll still see them throughout the story. :)
Thanks for loving this so much, I'm going to re-request the last chapter for you!