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Hello, it's patronus_charm from the review tag!

I liked how Narcissa Black's true emotions were hidden, as that's an important part of being Black, never reveal your true emotions! You say she had strawberry blonde hair, I thought it was platinum, I guess it could go lighter as she gets older though:)

The way you described her upbringing is exactly how I imagined it to be, and it made me feel rather sorry for Narcissa, as it doesn't sound very pleasant having to remain 'proper' all of the time. I thought it was a good idea to include where her infamous nose wrinkling comes from!

It's interesting to ponder how much would have changed if Narcissa would have been sorted into Ravenclaw, as it could have resulted in no Draco possibly.

It was nice to how caring Andromeda was, as I'm always interested to see how people make all three sisters interact with one another, and I think you did a really believable job!

Overall I thought it was a great chapter, and a really interesting perspective to explore! I loved the last line about Narcissa only being free in dreams, I thought it was great! I'm off to read the next chapters now, Kiana :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked my characterisation of Narcissa, her emotions, and her upbringing.

Oh I always thought she had strawberry blonde hair, but yeah it could get lighter as she grows up.

I wanted to invent something of my own regarding the nose wrinkling to amuse my readers, and at the same time show her innocence, so I am glad you found it a good idea.

Hmm that's very true. I always think the houses people get sorted into define a lot of their future courses in life.

I am glad you liked Andromeda's portrayal too, and found the interaction between the three sisters believable.

Thanks again for reading!

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