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Review:adluvshp says:
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I am pleased to get a chance to come back and read chapter 2 of this story, as I was definitely left intrigued after reading chapter 1 the last time.

Needless to say, this chapter has spiked my curiosity further. I am eager to see what actually happened with Tori. She seemed to have a great life at Hogwarts, so why leave?
You have done a good job at maintaining the air of suspense =)

I also liked the way you introduced all the girls, and Albus. I liked Aine, she felt the nicest to me out of all. I felt a little sad for Charlie though, she's finding it so hard to fit in, especially since she's not a 'people person'.

You have really written the chapter well, raising a lot of questions in your readers' mind, and keeping this interesting. It also has a humorous edge to it which stops it all from getting boring. The narrative was fine with a good pace, flow, and grammar.

Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review! I'm glad you got a chance to read this chapter too:)

Oooh, it's great that you're curious, and even better that you think I have an 'air of suspense'! I'm glad you think I wrote this chapter well, it means a lot!


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