Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:KJ Expelliarmus says:
A good introductory chapter to Draco's inner thoughts, concerning to the newest addition to the Dark Order.

I hope you can update very soon your promising fanfic. Above all, to watch as Ginny's stay at Malfoy Manor, which is the excuse that she has given to the Weasleys are unaware of her absence in the Burrow, and what their true ancestry (actually, she can't be a Riddle because she is pure blood, and Voldemort has muggle blood by his father. She has to be a descendant of Morfin Gaunt, who is the only known brother of Merope Gaunt -Voldemort's mother- surely his granddaughter, because he died in Azkaban after being convicted of the murders of the family Riddle in 1942. However, if you want to save trouble, you could fix it by saying that she is a second cousin of Voldemort; therefore, Ginny' ancestor who was surnamed Gaunt could be a brother or sister of Marvolo Gaunt, the maternal grandfather of Voldemort; Thus, it would explain why Voldemort had trouble finding her and because Dumbledore knows nothing of her existence).

Author's Response: That's right! I forgot Voldemort wasn't pure blooded. Thanks for the tip! I'll have to do some adjusting. (:

Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 102
Submit Report: