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Review:AlexFan says:
Eddie sure knows how to deal with her problems, get as drunk as possible! I was being sarcastic by the way. But I have to admit, Eddie is really funny when she's drunk.

I really liked Oliver in this chapter, well, I liked him more than I liked him the previous chapters, it's like impossible to NOT like him. Anyway, he just seemed really sweet and nice in this chapter which is totally different to the person that he was portrayed as in chapters before.

Hearing the story of Eddie falling was really funny. Eddie is just trying to not make it seem like a big deal while Rose keeps adding in details. Oliver just stands there like an awkward turtle.

When it comes to Rose, I have mixed feelings about her. Sometimes I really like her and sometimes I just want to stab her in the face with a fork.

I've also totally fallen in love with Eddie, I liked her a lot in the previous chapters but I just loved her in this one and I've officially fallen in love with Eddie.

I think you did an awesome job of picking a name for Eddie's mother, Hypatia sounds just like something a witch would be named.

Speaking of Hypatia, for a mother, she's really embarrassing. It's also funny how instead of letting her daughter find the right guy, she does it for her and then sets Eddie up on a date. But, Hypatia can also get annoying with the child obsession of hers. I was glad that Eddie said something when she did.

Eddie yelling to the entire restaurant about how of course Jae would say that was hilarious.

Anyway, it was a good chapter and there weren't any grammar mistakes as far as I know. I really enjoyed reading this chapter.

Author's Response: Hello, hello, hello! I appreciate all of your reviews so very much. :3

I'm glad that readers are liking Oliver. I wanted them to feel the same way that Edie does about him; frustrated and irritated and honestly a bit petty--yet somewhere deep down in there, he's actually a decent person. hehe.

I got the name Hypatia from the Greek philosopher who was killed for being an atheist. I think they even accused her of witchcraft, so I thought the name was perfect for a woman like Hypatia Lennox! (Overly-opinionated, stubborn, and basically just like Edie.)

Thank you again so very much! :D

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