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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello lovely! Just filling in your requested review!

I'm really pleased you requested another of your stories, they're always so fun to read. I have to say before anything else that I adored your portrayal of George here. When he called Roxanne 'beautiful girl' when they're dancing I could just see how much he loves her and oh it was just amazing!! I loved it! I'm glad you acknowledged he still gets sad sometimes but doesn't let it affect his relationship with his children, it was just lovely to read!

In fact I loved the whole Weasley gang and how you kept weaving them in and out of the party. I did get thrown off a little by you calling Fred 'Perce' but I got there eventually. Percy in this was fabulous by the way. I loved the thought that he manages to get himself sorted and lighten up with his lovely wife - Audrey is great too by the way. And you got all the old Quidditch gang in and together yay! It was making me so happy to read!

Your Roxanne is a really strong character and I thought you did an amazing job of bringing her to life! From reading it you make it so obvious she is George and Angelina's child. I really took to her and really want to read more about her!

As always your Georgelina writing is spot on. They are lovely in this chapter. It's nice to see them happy and well with their family and you wrote it well.

Hmm leaving it on a bit of a cliff hanger with Benjamin Malfoy! I wasn't sure whether he was a replacement for Scorpius or whether this is a different Malfoy - I look forward to finding out!!

As always you have an amazing story! Look forward to reading more!

Lauren :D

Author's Response: Hello!

Ooh, hello darling! Its always so lovely to see you back and thanks for coming! You're welcome to read and review anytime you like and I shall be doing the same soon!
Ah, I had to put in there how much George loves his daughter, Roxanne is such a daddy's girl and its so apparent in that dance, right? Hahah. The fact that he still gets sad about everything was a point I wanted to make, but I didn't want it to be as if he neglected his family because of it. George has healed quite a bit from the past and I loved that you enjoyed it, he's a good boy! :D
The Weasley clan is SO hard to write, I got a little confused on who was who and who had to be where. But I survived it somehow. Though, not without crying a little and eating my share of cupcakes.
Yeah, alot of people keep mentioning that its sort of a little off-putting for Roxanne to call her brother "Perce" but I'm glad that you got used o it eventually. I might go into better detail about that later on, there's more of a reason as to why she does it, not just because his name is sooo long. Hahaha.
Ooh, Percy. I adore him and Audrey and she has lightened him up alot so he's not quite as stuffy, though he can be a but uptight on occasion, depending on what he's doing. Hahaha.
Yay, I was so worried about my Roxanne, I took her in a different direction than some of the other fics I've read. I wasn't sure if it would come acros very well but thanks! :)
She's so like George and she's so like Angelina, I think I got a good balance with her and those two always make me smile. Oh, Georgelina! Live on! :3
Hahah, oh, Benjamin. He's not a replacement for Scorpius really, since that little demon is only ten years old in this story. Thanks for stopping by and its always appreciated! >_<
Much love,

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