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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

Hey, darling, its Gabbie here with your requested review and thanks for giving this to me again to read, I honestly enjoyed the first chapter so much that I'd inteded on going back to favorite this. I think you have such a unique story here and your Edie is just the most perfectly unperfect person ever. She seems so real that I could sit next to her and have a long chat about how horrible and boring my real life is. I honestly do enjoy how awkward you make her and how unsatisfied with her job she is while also painting this picture of WW for me! It doesn't seem like a great place to work, especially for a girl like her that wants to branch out to bigger and more serious things. The Goblin strike that you mentioned had me really interested and I thought that it showed a hint of how much the times had changed. So, great job and I can't believe how much she has to suffer but that bit with Mildred was too hilarious. I could picture every little awkward "buddy" moment and I thought you got that spot on, your characters are amazing. All the details that you added into, from Theo's lovely bum and to the eerie actions of Rose stalking Theo to LOOK at his lovely bum, were great. That ending made me want to grit my teeth though, I felt so bad for Edie, and I hope she spat in her boss's tea. :3
So, no CC's or anything, I thought that this was really engrossing and your characters are great, the jokes really funny. So great job!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Yay, yay, yay, yay!!! I am so glad you liked it. I actually just went back and edited this chapter today, particularly shortening sentences and stuff. I'm much happier with the finished product now, so I'm sorry you read the "old" version. hehe xD

I really wanted Edie to just be a normal person. I wanted her to be feisty but too awkward to get away with it; intelligent but stuck in a position where she doesn't get to display it. And I wanted her to be pretty, but to have a friend who is so stunningly beautiful that Edie "might as well be a guy."

It's so nice to see that you genuinely enjoy this story--I love having readers that I don't have to request! haha. Quite the ego boost!

Thank you again, so much!


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