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Review:Lumos Nox says:
Hello it's Vicky from the review tag :)

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story, I love the plot and everything, it's so brilliant.

I loved the way you portrayed Lily. Normally you'd expect her to be this goody-two-shoes kind of girl who does everything by the rule, but she forgot her best friend's birthday. I MEAN WHO DOES THAT? She certainly doesn't get better than that, does she?

Millie sounds like the perfect friend. I would get mad at my bestfriend if she forgot mine (as I would constantly remind them months before), but she didn't. She's so cool-headed and everything, unlike Lily.

The relationship between Lily and James is so different, in a good way. I expected James, known prankster, to fall in love with quiet bookworm Lily in a cliche'd way. I'm so happy you added your own twist to it, making it completly original!

“Honey, even you can’t get me Batman.” is definetly my favourite quote from this chapter. It's so funny, and it just shows how much fun Millie and Lily have.

So Sirius and Millie dated? I have to continue reading now! ADDED TO FAVOURITES! It's so interesting that I have to see what happens next.

Normally I don't read Mauraders Eras and so I had no idea what to expect. I'm glad I did though, because this was amazing!

Keep up the good work.
-Vicky.

Author's Response: Hola!

Thanks for liking it already! And calling it brilliant!

And I really wanted Lily to be like that. I've always thought of Lily this way. I think she matures and softens a little around the edges a little later on in the story of her life. But seriously, I know. I'd kill my best friend if they forgot my birthday.

Millie is pretty chill when it comes to Lily. I think she understands her quite well, and so knows that Lily didn't do it on purpose or anything - and Lily does try to make up for it.

Well, there is that cliche (sort of) but it isn't Lily and James' cliche!

The Batman quote is also one of my faves for the entire story. I rewrote this chapter about three times, and that line survived all three re-writes, because I love it so much!

And Sirius and Millie didn't date... Sirius is just an idiot. And thank you for favouriting! So much love for you right now!

Well, thank you for stepping out of your comfort zone (I know how hard that can be)! And I'm so happy that you enjoyed is so much!

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