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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hello :) Laurenzo7321 here with your requested review!

I thought this was another great chapter to your story!

I thought the beginning part was really poignant with the church. You then contrasted that with the image of her pressed against an ally with a stranger as she wanted the company. It was just very harsh and really effective.

So bringing the three muggle borns into the house is really interesting and I look forward to seeing how things go from here as it seems like it's going to be eventful. It was nice for Katie to have someone and even though she still drank, she seemed better to me. I had to smile at Colin being annoying though! I do feel sorry for the Creevy brothers though, their story is just as awful as Katie's really!

Your Katie and Oliver moments were great once again. The kind of awkwardness you create between them at the start was fun to read. But when he came back it was lovely to see them having a nice conversation with Katie fairly sober! I'm sorry I repeat this in every review but your Oliver is just too sweet and cute, I love him! I just want to keep him haha! I felt so sorry for him giving up Quidditch!

Hmm so things seem to be looking up slightly. Another lovely chapter and I look forward to reading more!

Lauren

Author's Response: Hi again!

Thank you for the review :) I'm really glad you liked the beginning and the setting -- long story short, I go to a Catholic school and had to go to Christmas Mass (though I myself am not Catholic or even Christian), so that was a little sneaky self-insertion/life-insertion there :3 But yes, I'm glad you caught the contrast there :)

Yayyy, I'm really happy you liked the three Muggleborns going to stay with Katie. I wanted Katie to do something good for a change, something that would keep her going. Having people stay with her was the way I think she could have something to live for again.

Haha, yes, Colin is still annoying, but to be fair, I think he had a right to be angry considering what a hard time he was going through. And hehe, I do love Oliver :3 Yeah, it was nice that they had a conversation where Katie wasn't off her face or anything, lol. Don't apologise -- that kind of comment makes me smile so much! :D

Thank you so much for the lovely review!

Soraya xxx


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