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Review:onestop_hpfan18 says:
They kissed, they kissed, they kissed! I totally just had a fangirl moment when she kissed him, not even going to lie. It was cute, awkward, and it had just the right amount of tension build up leading to it. And I have a feeling that the real reason Matt pulled out wasn't just because Lily's his best friend's sister (may be part of it, though) but rather about his furry little problem once a month. But how is Lily to know about that. Bah, so frustrating. But in a good way. If it were easy to get these two together than there wouldn't be a point for a story :P Great chapter, Sarah! (:

Author's Response: They did! Aww, I'm totally glad you had a fangirl moment. That makes me really happy! I'm glad you thought it had the right amount of awkward and tension because I always worry when I write kissing scenes. You're right in that there are other reasons Matt stopped the kiss besides Lily being Albus's sister, but Lily has no idea. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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