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Review:Remus says:
Hey! Perelandra here. So...back on December 21 I asked for 5 one-shots...and you were the 5th. I said I was to get to you within 48hrs...but it didn't happen. Holidays and such. I'm sorry! Up until now I've been busy with life, and my own story...but I'm here now! Ready to tackle your story!

First of all, just so you know, I love Founders fics. They don't get that much love or respect! So kudos to you for writing one!

The line that says 'They were sat in a clearing' ---It reads weird, perhaps you meant 'they were sitting...'. Or maybe 'They sat in a clearing...' to make it go with the rest of your sentence.

I really loved this! I usually read and review at the same time but your story managed to suck me right in! I just couldn't stop! I wanted to know if Godric was going to die or what! At first, when I began to read the last paragraph, I thought he had been a ghost to come see her just before his passing. I was getting ready for the reveal moment, that I should get some tissues for the tears of sadness...but it didn't happen. Actually came back to her! However, I wish you had expanded this just a bit more. Where did he go? What happened? Was it a war? Is this during Hogwarts? Before? So many questions! Hahaha!

I could feel the love she had for him, and the desperation she felt when he didn't come back after years. This story was cute, fantastic and just overall a great read! Grammar was spot on except for that bit of snag I told you about. The flow this story had was fantastic, by the way. I think that's what managed to suck me right in and wouldn't let me go until I got to the very end.

Thank you for letting me read this one-shot! :D

Until next time!

--Rosie

Author's Response: Hey, I'd completly forgotten about that so no worries and I love founders as well but I can't really write all four of the together!
Thanks for pointing that out, I've went back and altered it! :)
I'm glad you liked it! I was considering a sad ending but I prefer happy ending so ended up with one!
I'll see what I can do as too add more on, I'll have a re-read and add some more information.
Thank you so much, and thank you for reviewing! :)


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