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Review:MadiMalfoy says:
Well that's awkward when you walk in on your former mortal enemy in the shower without realizing it...but it was funny! Just a few suggestions I have for you--make sure they sound like the characters should--it seems like they are in the American west coast or something that is not English. Also, maybe use stronger vocabulary to strengthen descriptions and get attitudes/emotions across better. I would also suggest getting a beta reader for grammar/details to help you improve the writing. But so far so good, write some more of this soon! :) xx

Author's Response: Im English myself, and i write in English vocab, so sorry if it doesnt sound like it,. i will make more of an effort next time, to make them sound better. thankyou for your review, and im taking note of it all :') x

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