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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was very very heartbreaking. I actually really liked your writing style - it was very effective to express George's feelings. The disorientation, the desperation, it became all evident in your writing style itself. The scenes were very touching too, especially when George turns into Fred by taking the Polyjuice. I felt so sorry for him throughout. You've portrayed his grief very well. The ending again broke my heart, what with the writing on his headstone.

All in all, a brilliantly written chapter. I almost cried. Great job!

10/10
~AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much for your lovely words, Aditi! I'm really really flattered that you like the style of this; it can't have been the easiest chapter to get through because I imagine it must've been pretty dense! You've pretty much got George's state of mind - disorientation, disbelief and everything.

I'm so so happy that you thought this chapter good! Thanks for reading and reviewing all three chapters of this story! I will be updating soon :)

-teh


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