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Review:adluvshp says:
Slytherin review tag!

Haha this was a funny little one-shot indeed! I gave an entry for the same challenge too (Charm Those Words) and it was fun writing it, but reading the other entries is more fun as well :D

I loved your concept, and how Melina made this all up to just have a little fun without thinking of the aftermath. The scenes were written well and with the humorous edge required. It was all kind of silly but made for a nice read. I chuckled a couple of times too xP

I would have liked to see the aftermath of the events though. It would have been nice to know what McGonagall did and such, and what "punishment" she gave to the twins and Melina. The ending really left me curious.

But anyway, this was a fun read, good work!


Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I read you're entry, too, back then and loved it. I'm still not sure why I hadn't reviewed it then. But yeah, it is fun writing silly stories.

Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed the concept of how Melina made it all up and how it was just supposed to be silly and fun, other people always ask me questions "is it a real day?" or "is she trying to get the twins in trouble?" and "what was the point?" and no, I don't think she is, but I also didn't put that much thought into when writing cause it was just supposed to be fun and I wasn't going to worry about every single detail (except for the muggles, partway through I was like, "I have to treat the muggles with canon, and they won't be able to see the castle, how is this gonna work?" but it turned out alright in the end). I have to admit I was worried people wouldn't find it funny enough, and that they wouldn't get my sense of humor.

I know. A lot of people want to know what happened, but I just wanted to leave it on a funny note and a cliffhanger for pizzazz. I didn't want to ruin it by adding more and take away from the humor.

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.


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