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Review:Serendipity1234 says:
I AM SO INCREDIBLY FREAKING ECSTATIC THAT YOU'RE BACK! And this chapter! Whoa. Things really escalated. I'm loving it.
I actually went back and reread all the chapters. I wanted to remember the fine details and I noticed you edited them. I adore this story and I think the changes you made were good ones!
I love Fred and George and Miranda and Elbie and EVERYONE. THEY'RE SO CUTE. I want Elbie to be my boyfriend. Or Oliver, of course.
That was such an intense scene at the end -it was awesome. I hope to catch a few more future chapters ;)
I really do love Oliver. He's so caring and sweet and stubborn and annoying. They really are perfect for each other. Hopefully Keegan is FINALLY realizing this.
I have high hopes for Seamus and Lucy. But can I just say how much I love Penny? She's probably my favorite of Keegan's girl friends (not that I don't adore Miranda of course). I love how she has such a straight-forward, no-nonsense attitude and she's a really funny character. She's such a great friend too. I love her.
I know I'll miss this story like crazy when it ends so I hope it doesn't TOO soon. A sequel sounds fabulous though. I love Adam. (I love them all). Will Penny be in it? I think she should be. She's awesome. I actually hope they're all in it. Will there be a girl perspective? A new OC? I'd read it anyway but I really prefer female or 3rd person omniscient perspectives in fanfiction. (And a lot of teen fiction. But I guys are alright sometimes. I just usually don't always connect to them in the same way.)
And I'm glad that Keegan isn't just going to allow her mother to die, but I'm not going to sympathize with her mother. I probably could've if she'd just been pathetic and then returned or if she told them she was dying at another time, but the fact that she barely had a conversation with them and then blurted out "I'm dying"...well she sucks. When I read that I just thought 'well, enjoy the afterlife. See ya.' (In my defense she's fictional. I'm not totally heartless, promise). It was just the way she did it. I don't care if she cares about her kids and loves them and it breaks her heart. She should've started with that or mentioned it in the middle or something. Not just desperately use it to drag them back. I know they were leaving but I really believe they would've forgiven her in time. And I think she could figure that out. I don't know, I can't explain my thoughts very well, but I just thought that she was selfish and regardless how she feels about them, her actions don't reflect caring.
Normally I would hope that children and mother reconcile. That they deal with their issues and fix their relationship. But this time I don't really want that. Keegan's dad is a sweetheart and fixing things with the mom aren't really worth hurting him, in my opinion. At this moment anyway. I don't really know what to make of the mother I guess. I just hope she dies before they can do the surgery :)
(Yeah...well I'm just going to leave it. My thoughts are a mess)
But really who even cares about the mother?? THEY KISSED. HOLY FLYING HIPPOS I AM SO EXCITED ABOUT THIS DEVELOPMENT.
UPDATE SOON? Please?

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