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Review:Vivyan says:
Ah so many colorful words I could use, but alas.12+. So characters (and people in real life) that are like that pretty much tick me off a bunch. Like stubborn, unwilling to listen, overreacting-type people. But I knew you had to make something happen cos there's still round 30 chapters left. But other than that, I really like your story(:

Author's Response: Thank you! I know that it seems like an overreaction on Laura's part, but then again she's an insecure 17 yo girl who thinks that her life is WAY too good to be true. Therefore, when it appears that it's not true (and therefore her suspicion was correct) she's a little too quick to jump on that. An overreaction, sure, but totally in character. If it makes you feel better she does mature out of that in the next 30 chapters, so don't give up. :)

cheers, Mel

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