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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Okay, I just wrote this REALLY long review and now it's disappeared because my Internet went funny. -_-

I'll try and say what I remember, but t wont be as eloquent and such. I'm starting to get really pressed for time. :/

Anyway, onto the review! :)

Firstly, I loved the way you've written Scorpius and Rose. They have traits from their parents but they aren't total clones of them, which is what we often see in fanfiction.

I'm really curious as to what happened with Hermione and Rose; although I'm guessing it had something to do with Rose going overseas to study. Or getting babied like she said on the plane.

And who is this mysterious person? You've really got a knack for creating all this mystery and cluelessness. For some reason, I think it's someone in/close with the family or -

OH MY GOD WHAT IF IT'S DEAN?!

It probably isn't, but I have an inkling it's someone close with Harry.

I only have one crit and that is that when the family speak, they all speak very formally. Most people tend to speak to their families with slang (excluding the grandparents).

Other than that, I LOVED seeing them all bond together. It was really sweet. Especially with Molly remembering what Remus said to her in Order of the Phoenix. :')

Anyway, this was another great chapter! Hope you update soon! :D

10/10! :D

Author's Response: Hey!

First of all, thank you so much for all your lovely reviews, I'll respond to them all. Second, sorry it's taken me this long.

I'm happy you enjoy this and that the mystery of it all is catching on.

And no, it isn't Dean... Or is it? I'm not telling!

As for the dialogue with the family, seeing as Rose has been away for so long, there is a story there. Which you'll learn in a few chapters. And it explains (almost) everything.

Once again thank you for the lovely comments!

Ral


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