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Review:Courtney Dark says:
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Oh my goodness, this was such a sweet and adorable and absolutely perfect one shot! I must admit, though I don't write it very often, I do have a bit of a soft spot for fluff and this certainly hit the mark!

I love the way you started this, with the whole 'Teddy Lupin had many problems in his life' thing. And it was a nice touch how you finished the same way, too-it really tied the whole thing up and made me smile in a goofy, cheesy sort of way. I also feel as if the beginning set the mood for the one-shot, which is always important.

Your characterizations of Teddy and Victoire are lovely. And the fact that Teddy's hair acts like a mood ring and turns green when he's with Victoire...very nice touch! It could be very awkward, being a metamorphmagus (did I spell that right?) sometimes, couldn't it?

I love the little details you added into this to make it seem more believable and more...Hogwarts. The story of the cactus was a very nice touch and the awkwardness when Victoire tried asking Teddy out...aw! It was just so cute!

One other thing. Is the line: 'She continued to stare at me' supposed to be 'She continued to stare at him' or 'She continued to stare at Teddy'? *Shrugs uncertainly*

Anyway great read, thanks so much!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: THANK YOU FOR LIKING FLUFF! I LOVE YOU FOR THAT REASON ONLY!

Aww, thanks! I was worried about the beginning and end, because I was worried about being repetitive.

Yes, Teddy is adorable. I love him so much; I'm just glad that it showed through! And it really could get very awkward being a metamorphmagus (forget spelling it, how on earth does one say that?).

And thanks for the words of praise on the detail. I tried really hard to work on that in this fic, because I usually skip out on it!

And yeah... whilst I was writing, I accidentally slipped into first person, but I missed it when I came back to edit it - I only realised it once I'd submitted the chapter! I have to fix that, soon!


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