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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

OMG. Sirius is my favourite character of all time, and reading stuff like this just breaks my heart - but your story did it in a really good way!

For me, writing a good story in 500 words would be near-impossible, so I'm always uber-impressed when I see it done so well.

I think you really captured the essence of Sirius in this one. So often, we just see the teenage boy side of him, and of course later on, the effects of Azkaban mar his soul. But here, you show a very important part of him, I think. The depth of his love, the force of his loneliness, just how scared he really is. I think this portrayal is an excellent in-between for the charming rebel and the grief-mad Sirius who subsequently ends up in Azkaban.

And excellent story!

Author's Response: I'm so happy that you think I portrayed Sirius well in this ♥ I think these few hours will always be the most heart breaking thing about the entire HP series. We know from canon that Sirius went to check on Peter and got worried when he wasn't there. Those few moments, racing to the Potter, just hoping that every feeling inside you is wrong.. seeing his dead best friends.. gah. It's just so much for one person to try and handle, and I always just want to give him a big hug when I think about this whole Halloween night.

Thank you so much for your lovely review, sorry for my rambly response, haha!


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