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Review:potterfan310 says:

I love Albus/OC stories and I was intrigued by the title because I'm a sucka for pregnancy stories as well.

This is a really good start even though it's short and your descriptions are well done and I you've done a good job of setting the scene and your characters.

But I feel we could learn more about them/their relationship/how they met etc... Unless you're putting this information in future chapters.

This might just be me but I find it hard to read suck big chunks of writer so maybe break it up into smaller paragraphs.

Good luck and happy writing! :)

Soph xxx

Author's Response: thank you! im glad you liked my writing =)

I will try to keep what you said in mind for the next update :P

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