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Review:caoty says:
Hey, I'm here from tag. *waves*

So I love minor character Slytherins, especially Tracey Davis, Daphne Greengrass and Theodore Nott. So this looks to be great fun.

I like how you've addressed Tracey's blood status, because the half-bloods of Slytherin - Snape, Voldemort - tend to be outsiders, and that puts her in a unique position. It does, though, feel as if she's been Sorted into the wrong House: maybe I'm reading it wrong, but Tracey doesn't seem as if she has taken the practical route to solving the problem of her isolation, as a Slytherin would. In this introduction at least, she seems to want to try and keep her head down and make friends and get out of Hogwarts alive, which is an attitude that is more suited to Hufflepuff or certain types of Ravenclaw or Remus Lupin IMO.
I don't know. Am I underestimating her? After all, we seem to have caught her at a bad time.

(Also, I really hope we see more Millicent/Crabbe. They seem like such a fun ship.)

Theodore Nott, on the other hand, seems like the quintessential Slytherin - he's manipulative, he knows what he wants and gets it. His personality clashes well with Tracey's, interestingly, and his plans for Tracey promise lots and lots of delicious drama to come.

Also, you get points for lesbian!Daphne. That's always fun to read.

Anyway, good luck with this fic, and happy post-NaNo editing. :D

Author's Response: Yeah Tracey isnt exactly what one would normally consider a Slytherin but I wanted to show that while you may be sorted into a certain house, that doesnt always mean that you are going to follow status quo, think of Peter and how he ended up as a coward and gave up his friends. Tracey probably would be more fitting for another house but yet she does have some slytherin qualities to her. Theo really is the typical slytherin and for him it will be interesting trying to get Tracey. Thanks so much for the review!


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