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Review:Jchrissy says:
Hi darling, here for review tag :)

I love that you're already starting out with humor, especially the comment about his green hair not having to deal with mother earth like James suggested haha.

I've seen Victoire done a lot of different ways but I really enjoy that you've made her a good student and she seems very modest, humble, and I definitely prefer that to a hotheaded attitude that I often see her with.

I really enjoy the amount of details yoi are putting into this. Not really in terms of making sure you describe every little thing, but how you just talked about Victoire tracing the grain of woot the became very interesting, that was just such a small but good description to give us an idea of how she's feeling.

Okay I have to admit, I really did not expect to enjoy this piece of much. Usually just little sweet one shots, cute as they are, are a bit boring. But I really really like this. I love the perfect amount of tension you built-up when Victoire was trying to ask Teddy, but Teddy wasn't understanding and then could barely speak.. It had such a very realistic sense of nervousness, and so appropriate for the 'friends moving past just friends' kind of situation.

This is such a sweet little read, I'm so happy I got the chance to enjoy it.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! I'm not sure if I'm good at humour or not, so your words mean a lot to me!

And thank Merlin you like Victoire! I was worried about her - her character's not really fleshed out properly, but she's still so central to the story!

And thank you for detail praise! I'm terrible with description, so I really, really tried with this story, and I'm so happy that I'm improving!

I know - most people who've read and reviewed have said the same thing! And I'm honestly blown away by how much people do end up enjoying it! I've never really written tension before, so I'm glad that it seemed to work!

Thank you once again!


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