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Review:ohmymerlin says:
So I thought I'd quickly review because I got chills from this chapter! Yes, it was THAT good! :D

This was AMAZING! I loved it and I suspect a Rose/Scorpius ship is coming along? (Muhahahahaha)

I noticed you had some typos but it's just little nit-picky things that bothered me:

"We're going to leave know - it should be 'now' -. Once again, so sorry for your loss." he finished, not wanting to impose on this time of mourning any more than necessary. - you also forgot the closing quote. " -

and:

"We can't bring somebody from outside in this stage of his investigation. Imagine the panic if word got out that there's a killer on the loose making clone-wands. People would start going crazy, the reports alone would be enough to burry - it should be 'bury' -us."

Anyway, those were the only two things I noticed and they were really small, it wasn't a major deal I'm just picky. :p

Also, that was Moody's wand?! :O Something strange is going on here! And I LOVED Ron's reaction to calling in Rose. He's an overprotective father and he still hasn't gotten over his grudge of Draco Malfoy. :')

I'm really interested to see how Rose and Scorpius act around each other, it's getting me excited! :D

Another, amazing chapter! 10/10! :D

Author's Response: You suspect right, something may be happening there. *grin* If it all goes acording to plan and these characters don't take on lives of their own and spoil my fun. Which they tend to do sometimes.

I'm sure that there are typos in there and they will get edited out eventually, but thank you for pointing those out to me, it makes my job easier.

As for Ron, he's my very favorite character to write, too bad I can't squeeze him into every scene without it being strange.

Again, thank you so much for the lovely comments, they really made my day!


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