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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I thought this was a great chapter! Though in saying that, I think every chapter is a good chapter so no surprises there. But I find a lot of people tend to forget about the school side of Hogwarts if you know what I mean, so it was nice to read a chapter that took place entirely in a classroom.

Your description of Divination was great-just so on par with Harry's descriptions in the books that I found myself reminiscing! I think the paragraph that began with: 'Divination was one of the classes that Brienne found herself dreading' described this personally, and I also liked the mention of the Weasley twins being late. It was just so in character!

I am curious about Paisley Hamilton. Is she going to feature in any more of the story? And if so, what is her backstory? Hmmm...I can't wait to find out! You always leave me asking so many questions, which I absolutely love! Anyway, I thought the Tarot Cards were a very nice touch to the character, and very interesting to read about. I loved the names and descriptions you gave each card! And the cards that Brienne picked...eerily accurate. Maybe there is some truth to Divination after all!

I found the 'Justice' card the most interesting of all, and I keep wondering whether Brienne ever will have justice. Whether she'll ever find out what happened to her mother. Your story is so full of surprises that I'm sure anything could happen! I loved this line: 'Justice remained black. No matter how much Brienne ran her fingers over the shiny card, Justice never changed. She supposed she was still in the dark about that card.' I felt it summed up the mood of this chapter perfectly.

The addition of Fred and George putting Bertie Botts and Blood Sweets in the Slytherins' lunch was a nice touch. I always do enjoy a bit of humour, especially when coming from the Weasley twins!

Good job, like always!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hi! I'm glad you liked this chapter too! Paisley is a reader favourite, and she will be returning :) A new addition to the group!

Yes, this chapter certainly foreshadows what's to come- it's her life up to coming to Hogwarts and what will encompass her life from now on, so really this chapter is pretty crucial xD

I'm really glad you still are liking the story, and thanks for the lovely review :)


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