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Review:Fawkes394 says:
Hey! I saw this yesterday, but with the interminable amount of homework my English teacher left us I didn't have time to review. I really loved this chapter, I'm happy to see that Lily is letting someone else in her life and that she has a sort-of-real-friend finally. I really like Jack (he is so sweet!) and I hope he doesn't bring any trouble.

Lily's outburst in the Great Hall! I think she over reacts a little, but Sammy should know better than to talk about Ellie before her. Poor Lily, it has to be terrible to have your best friend in that condition, and she can't 'move on' because even if Ellie isn't always herself she's still there.Is so sad that she seems to be getting worse :'(

Author's Response: Dastardly homework! How dare it burden you with such foul fortune! ;) At least it's English. English is fun (well, to me it is). I know, good ol' Lillers (although it has just occurred to me when I read that that she didn't have much choice :D ) I really like Jack too.
Hmm... you might have a point there. I didn't look at it that way. I might revise it- although having said that, have you noticed how Lily's never cried? She doesn't like crying- thinks it's pointless- but if she gets to the point of needing to she tends to get angry, violent, determined to fix it or a mixture of the three. So I might rewrite some of that- thanks for pointing that out!
I'm sorry about Ellie. And Lily. But... at least it can't get worse. Right? :P Thanks for reading and coming back to review!


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