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Review:Pheonix Potioneer says:
Sorry I haven't reviewed your chapter yet. I've been terribly busy!

I wonder what's up with Angie. I don't thing she's bad, just has an interesting past. I can't help asking Albus to mind his own business though!

I have a feeling those dolls would have driven me mad too. When I was younger, I hated dolls that talked. I only liked regular dolls.

I like that you have James threaten to break Lily's doll. My brother did that thing to me too, so I sympathize with Lily. I see myself so much in her.

Poor Albus gets homesick. I can see why though, he's only eleven years old and is at Hogwarts most of the year. We didn't see that much in Harry Potter though, since he dreaded going home! :)

Another great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks. I love hearing your opinions on stuff.

And it's kind of amusing that you said Albus should mind his own business since somebody else basically tells him that in the next chapter and basically says that there are some mysteries that aren't anybody's business. He's just kind of paranoid at the idea of somebody who appears to support the Death Eaters rooting through his stuff and all, but yeah, that doesn't excuse trying to find out everybody's private business.

Yeah, I would imagine most kids would find it difficult being away from their families for a month at a time. It's different for Harry, since he'd have preferred be anywhere else. But I knew people at college (or university if you're British or Australian) who were really upset to be away from their families and that was 5 days at a time and we were all 17 or older.

Can understand why dolls that talked would drive you mad. They were usually pretty limited in what they said anyway. When I was 4, I had a doll who could walk AND talk. I was amazed. I thought that was really the height of technology. Quite a different world from today's, eh.

And thanks again for the review.

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