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Review:adluvshp says:
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Aw, this was such a sad story, yet I liked its hopeful ending. I think you portrayed young Severus really well, the poor thing. I loved the concept of the 'sorry and fixing things', so very touching! The whole scenario at his home was well-written too, and I liked how you wrote the interactions between him and his mother. The whole piece was very sad and heartbreaking, but the ending part was really sweet. I liked how Severus instantly felt this hope from Lily, and could feel he could trust her.

The over all story was very nice and made for a great read. The pace, flow, characterisation, grammar, and emotional intensity - everything was perfect!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hi m'dear! I'm so happy that you think I portrayed Severus well, it definitely wasn't easy.

I'm a die hard James/Lily shipper, but the girl I wrote this for loves Snape/Lily so much.. so I figured writing a little one shot that had to do with how they became friends would be a good choice :)

I always worry about my pace and flow, so I'm really happy that they both felt adequate in this.

Thank you so much for the wonderful review ♥


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