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Review:ohmymerlin says:
So I'm finally here! :D

This is a good opening chapter, I'm very intrigued! :D

It's a bit strange that Vess' mother gave her alcohol but I guess that's why she was such an awful mother.

I really liked this! I'm going to add this to my favourites and therefore you must update soon! Muhahaha! :p

I will be returning very soon. >:)

10/10! :D

Author's Response: So, 'soon' has ended up being two and a half years later... But I've just submitted the next chapter for validation (Sept 2015) so it'll hopefully be up for you to read soon.

The part when Vanessa's mum gives her Firewhisky was actually inspired by the mini tv series, The Shiralee. I needed something to highlight that even though her dad isn't the ideal example of a good parent, he is still a whole lot better than Abigail.

Anyway, thanks again for your review. I hope to hear from you again soon :)

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