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Review:adluvshp says:
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Wow, this was really very well-written. I love angst, and I really enjoyed reading this. I've never read Tom/Minerva before (not a fan really) but still, I liked it.

Minerva's emotions were shown well. I could feel her dilemma, her pain, her resolve nicely. Tom seemed a little OOC to me, I find it hard to imagine that he can "love" anyone ever, or he can go to Minerva and ask her to save him, he just doesn't seem that type of person to me. I find it hard to accept that Minerva could have loved him and saved him, I think Tom was beyond saving anyway.

But nevertheless, your story was well-written and despite the OOC-ness, it was quite okay. The concept was unique, and the overall narrative was intense. The ending was powerful as well.

Good work!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

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