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Review:ScoroseShipper07 says:
Holy crap. I'm ashamed. I finally come back to this site and seek this story out and discover you've released a handful of chapters...and I wasn't there to read/review them!

So just to touch on a few things, I enjoyed the way you handled them "taking their relationship another step forward". Despite the mature rating on this story and having full rights to making it as smutty as anyone's darkest desires, you made it tasteful, respectful and more about their emotions than the actual deed.

I'm fairly glad you didn't have Scorpius joining them at the Burrow for Christmas. At this stage of their relationship, it'd seem a bit overly-done and forced, to be quite honest. I do like how you've set up the St. Mungo's Charity Ball though. A few things should come to a head there.

I am really enamored with the Lily/Eli subplot. I'm curious as to where you'd take that as well.

I don't have to tell you to keep being fantastic, since you don't have a problem in doing exactly that.

Author's Response: Seeing your review makes my day! :)

I haven't been posting much or doing much with this story lately--mainly because it was my senior year in college--but I've come back and I am all about getting this story moving again. Yay!

I'm glad that you thought that step was tasteful--I don't mind smut or detailed scenes, but I just felt that with Rose and Scorpius being young and having so many very young characters in the story, being too descriptive would just feel awkward or even forced. It was also much more about Rose feeling comfortable enough with their relationship to move forward.

Yeah, I think the whole "we just started dating and I'm going to stay at your parents/grandparents' house for the entire Christmas holiday" bit is a little extreme. When I was seventeen, I didn't have friends over for more than two nights tops. So, I am totally with you on that. They will see each other during break, but there won't be sleepovers with all of the Hogwarts students in Molly and Arthur's living room. LOL.

So glad you like Lily and Eli! :)

Thank you so much for the review! I can't wait to hear from you again with future updates!

Happy Summer!

--Kate


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