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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello hello hello!
I know you said that this chapter was a bit if a filler, but I think it's one of my favorites so far! I just love how you write the marauders together, and how they're such good friends even though their personalities clash quite a bit!
I feel bad that Beth and Severus can't meet up as often because of the yucky weather! But fortunately for Sirius, this makes a lot more time for them to bond! Haha. He's so funny sometimes, because he really wants to grow up and go on missions, and be an important Order member and everything, but he still seems like such a kid! Even the fact that he calls missions missions makes me think of a little kid. And of course because he's standing outside bouncing a rubber ball on the sidewalk! Haha.
And I love how we find out that James and Lily have to go into hiding, and that poor Remus is the one to deliver the news! I was wondering when that would come up. I can't believe that's happening. And that Harry is going to come along soon! They're just so young! I clearly can't wrap my head around that fact based on the fact that I mention it in practically every review I leave for this story!
And Sirius just killed me at the end of this chapter! Nothing good can come of Sirius convincing himself that he loves Beth! Especially when she likes Severus! I'm nervous to see how this all pans out...
This chapter was phenomenal, and I absolutely love this story! It's nice that I finally have a chance to start getting caught up with it! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Oh, how lovely to see you've returned again, Cassie! ♥ I'm so excited!

This definitely was filler, yes, but I'm pleased you enjoyed it all the same. :) I think this came about in large part because I missed all of the camaraderie and more-immature Sirius from ITB. You've hit the nail on the head as far as he's concerned: He very much does want to grow up and be treated like an adult, but at the same time, he perhaps more than any of the wants to cling to the good old days at Hogwarts, when things were less complicated and uncertain. Hence red rubber balls and bonding time. :3

This is the part where things start to turn a bit more dark for James and Lily, and after the prophecy's made it's only going to worsen, I'm afraid. :( Their story is such a tragic one, but I don't think I realized how /much/ until I started writing it, you know? (I'm pretty sure you do!) I can't wrap my head around how young they are sometimes...

Oh, Sirius. He is SO conflicted in this story. ♥ He really does need lots and lots of hugs and praise, I think. But anyway! Thanks a million for reviewing this chapter for me. I'm so glad you liked it!

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