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Review:AlexFan says:
This doesn't sound like Hermione to me, she seems too sadistic and Hermione, while being bossy and sometimes mean, is often gentle. Example A would be Kreacher.

Plus, she seems completely crazy, I mean, a lot of the time, Hermione was terrified of something going wrong, I don't think she'd really want to go through nearly being killed by Nagini.

Having said that, I guess I can kind of see why Hermione would enjoy fighting (though in the books that's probably the last thing she wants to do) and having been through a war and so many traumatic experiences, this new Hermione makes sense . . . in a way.

That being said, there were some parts of the old Hermione in here that shone through, the parts in the end where she was thinking to herself about what had happened. About what she had almost let happen.

There's still some of logical, rational thinking Hermione there.

Anyway, it was actually a pretty good prologue, the writing was good and there were barely any grammatical errors at all. But, this has succeeded in making me depressed for the rest of the day.

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