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Review:adluvshp says:
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Oh dear, this was such a well-written story. I have hardly come across stories describing Petunia's plight, and I think you did this in a very original and realistic way. I loved the way you captured Petunia's thought-process. The descriptions were very surreal and your writing style was quite captivating. It had this rhythmic element to it that I enjoyed very much.

The story flowed really well, the pace was good, the characterisation of Petunia and her feelings towards her sister were well-written, and the grammar was also good. All in all, this made for a great read!

10/10!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello there and thankyou! I think Petunia is a really interesting character- her actions in the books seem understandable if not admirable to me, and I wanted to explore that!
I'm glad you enjoyed the flow, pace etc because this is probably the one of my fics that I'm least enamoured with. The rhythmic thing just sort of happened when I was writing it, but it's good that you not only picked up on it but liked it! :P

Anyway thanks again!

-Bethany


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