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Review:Yolanda Yaxley the Yuletide Yak says:
You said this was a filler-y chapter, but I found it so exciting! It felt like a lot of changes were happening that would have large consequences, with us seeing more of Cygnus' plans for the future and how he would be dishonouring his brother.

I feel like we're really getting a handle on Regulus now, too, after the interspersed scenes of him in the last four or so chapters. Again, it feels like you're building towards some final scene for him, but it's all so subtle - the missing of his parents, the slight dislike of his uncle... I'm just so excited to find out what will happen! :D

Cissy was a nice addition, as Cygnus seems so fond of her - she seems a little like his Achilles Heel, something which could make him feel remorse for what he's done.

Doge seemed as strange as ever; Dumbledore's public hints that he should be doing right seemed very in-character; your last line was AMAZING for leaving me hanging! the Dark Mark is out and about?! :O

I loved absolutely all of it, and look forward to reading the remaining chapter (thus far) :)

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