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Review:Elphaba and Boyfriends says:
It's really interesting to see Charlie learn about muggle things like college. :) His father was always tinkering with muggle gadgets, but also seemed to get mixed up with the details, so it'd be fun to see what other things confuse or fascinate Charlie.

I also wonder what Charlie does when he's not at the bar. Does he look for a job? Or just bum around?

I really like the conversation between Charlie and Liz in front of her house, where she asks him about brothers and sisters, and his only reply is, "dead." Even though he doesn't mention names or specifics, it feels like this is the moment where he finally starts to move past his grief.

I'm curious to see what will happen next! :) I would like to see more dialog between these two. What could Charlie talk to her about that wouldn't give away that he's a wizard? What kind of misunderstandings would crop up? And what secrets is she hiding?

Author's Response: Haha! I really felt like the whole "College" thing was a nice touch. There are definitely some things that the pair doesn't really get about each other's lives. There will be plenty of Charlie mix-ups in the future!!

In my mind, Charlie has just been wandering around Rhode Island in his spare time, but I guess I forgot to include that! Thanks for pointing it out!!

It definitely took a lot for Charlie to even say the word "dead", so I agree that this moment was really a milestone for him!

I've actually already got the next chapter ready, I just haven't submitted it yet (which I am about to fix right now!!) XD

Thank you SO MUCH for your kind and thoughtful reviews, and I'm pretty sure I'll be back to request more once my next chapter goes up!! Hopefully some of your questions will be answered!!!


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