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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey it's me again from the review tag:)

I think it was really good that you didn't make Lorcan and Lysdander identical, because even though they are twins, they do have differences still so it was nice to see that you showed them from the start. By creating them as unique people it makes a lot more interesting to read.

I thought it was nice to see that the only thing he was good at was Herbology, as the way you make him out it sounds like he's another Neville. Therefore Neville would be more compassionate towards him as he understands it's not always that easy.

I think you should consider writing a sequel as I'm interested to know whether Lysander ever overcomes his problem about girls! Overall I really liked it:D Kiana :)

Author's Response: I do plan on continueing this story sometime, at least I hope to. I just end up getting caught up with my other stories and forget to work on ones I already have posted but I'm hoping to come back and work on all the stories I've got posted! I'm glad you liked Lorcan and Lysander! I wanted to make them different, and this was my first attempt at doing something rather funny. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! Thank you so much for the read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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